WOW! That was very intense. I liked the style of it. It made my head spin, but in the good way. Thankz for your comment on mine.

Ravyn

AMAZING! the entire poem is extremely intense which builds it up so much more...you can completely relate to the person in it...imagine it being yourself, it fills you with hatred and sadness, yet concern and discrace at the same time...it is an incredible work, one everyone should read to get a feel for it and understand that abuse really needs to be stopped...keep writing, I think everything can learn something from your thoughts!!

This is a very well written powerful intense poem. You really expressed yourself very well. I can defiantly relate to the idea of flashbacks, where objects or actions which remind you of an event will thrust your mind back to it and force you to relive all that happened.
Abuse is a terrible thing, which unfortunately is far too common. Be it physical, emotional or sexual it leaves lasting scars for the “victim” (I hate using that word but can think of no other right now). Though I do think that sexual may be far worse, I have experienced both of the others and can defiantly say they are far different from one another and difficult to compare but there is just something about the idea of sexual abuse which makes it so much worse…
Anyway, before I go on for too long I’ll stop there. This is a fantastically written piece with a lot of powerf and clearly expressed content.

5/5

Awsome poem!!!! It was really good you explained the emotions so well! It was really good.

Please r/r/c rose colored glasses...you pick the other one

Hm... Interesting way of going about this one -- but I like it. It's got a fresh, new, unique format and it goes together really nicely. It's nice that the flow isn't the main focus in this one, but the meanings of the words themselves, which is what a poem really is. Excellent work. 5/5

As always~ Kate

Very vivid descriptions, though the flow was different. I voted on this some time ago. Keep it up

This is an amazing piece of poetry i dont really no what to say i supose im speachless.
ive got nothing bad to say about this.

5/5 great work.

gemma
take care god bless you.

This was amazing. this is wat got u h/m in my contest. i loved the detailing and the emotion in it. it really is amajust amazing. 5/5

The raw pain and the intense emotions are there in every line and they seem to be silently screaming.

take care. do hope you are okay and that writing this has helped ease the pain a little.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Ahh
'The Poem'
I loved this one.
so painful and raw.
thanks for entering and congratulations coming 3rd.
5/5
~Emma

Wow, this is so intense! filled with emotion. the structure is superb, very unusual and yet perfect for this. the quick pace and questions make the reader dizzy and very accurately portray the feelings of the character.

the ending is also very powerful and makes the reader really want to help this girl!

-biscuit-

Hay Kaylee get in touch with me please.