WOW! that was just great. my favorite part had to be the end, extremly well written i thought.

Brad

P.S. thanks for being different by one, looking at loads of my poems, and two, not looking at the most recent ones.

Nice poem with great words which makes the poem so great. great talent.5/5

Wow.. another amazing poem. You have a lot of talent. This one also had great descriptions. It rhymed and flowed very well!

"She's only of glass I thought,
As they put her back to sleep,
Her icy head carved so real,
For then I began to weep,"
^^I LOVED that stanza!! Great job! 5/5

Classy poem the best one i have read on here for ages, loved the way it flowed so well. awesome stanzas

5/5 but you probably already new that

Awww this is so cute
so heartfelt and teary!!!
Idk, I just love the poem overall,somehow it made me feel like crying =(

Keep it up sweetie and thanks for ur comment
NemO xxxxxxxx

Real great poem i love it.

Beautiful. you have a real talent, keep it up!

One of my favorites i love how it flowed ur definately talented keep it up and thanks for your honesty on the comment you wrote for my poem

I can not believe you are only 14. I envy your talent. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.