Ohh my gosh that gave me chills! Wow...you've got such an amazing way with words!! I love all of your poems so much. There's only one thing I would change, and it is on "because you hurt is doesn't mean", you should take out the "is". It's just a typo hahah I do that all the time! But that poem is simply incredible....keep writin, hun!

Beautiful and sad, your sincerity is very clear.. Nice poem!

You have a way with poetry I loved it keep it up

Cuddles, this work comes straight from the heart and it's easy to see that. very powerfully done.

gosh, i have missed reading a lot of good work all this time!

love and luck
shobhana

A marvellous piece of work... simply enjoyed each and every word that i read in your poem...