I liked how you ened the poem once again great write!
5/5

Nice very deep loved the flow and rythem keep it up

Definately a sad poem.
It didnt seem to break at stanzas this time which im happy to say earned you a 5/5 from me.
keep smilin'
~Emah

Good poem, it was very heart felt and well written.
'Lead to way to victory.'
I think you may have ment
'Lead the way to victory'

Very well written!

Though the years have proved me wrong,
I need others to hold me tall.

What a powerful message!! Good Job!