Awww, that is very sweet, I ecourage yo to keep it up!!!!!!!! it was a bit sad, but if it's a true poem, I hope everything turns out ok, if it was based on you true life. 5/5!!!!!!!!!!!! perfect score!

Excellent-your emotions really shon threw

october xx

Wow that is realli good very deep keep writing!!!!
xoxox jessie
p.s thanx 4 the comments it realli means alot :)