I get back up, only to break down
[I really liked those lines]

This was a great poem. I can relate a little. They way you worded this was great also. I can't see anything wrong in there. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I really think this is quite deep, and very powerful. Don't forget about the pain, ignore it. And don't kill youreself, its time for you to live.

Amazing poem. i lvoe it.. i can relate alot to it.. thats how i feel too. i have to agree with everyone above.. dont kill urself. it mite sound like a good idea but it really isnt. cuz u dont kno how bad hte ppl who really care about u r gona feel. this is a great poem.. ur very talented.. keep writing. i will keep reading.
take care and stay strong
angie

Excellent poem, Nelle!! Deep.
5/5
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Awwww...the pain will never leave...the sadness tends to stay...and the heart always breaks.......5/5

@...that poem was a pleasure to read...im not saying that it made me happy since it is in the sad section, im saying it was simply beautifly written and was perfect in its own way..:):)...@

Thats a really great poem...sad but great. i relate to this so much..

*beth*
-xox-

Very well written piece with some well expressed content. It is not too short nor does it drag out making it the perfect length for both expression and the holding of the reader. It is very well written with some very powerful aspects.

5/5

I thought it was a good poem.

You never know when it's your time to die, and we don't have that decision. What we need to do in life, is live. That's it. We die when we die. Just incase you had any ideas, don't do it!!!!.. hope you feel better though, I can tell you are going through some rough stuff *hugs* take care!

Great poem Nelle I thought it was awesome there is a lot of emotion in it.......... Please read mine called rose colored glasses........thanks-ann

Such a sad poem. The pain never seems to go away. But stick it out.