Break

by Forsaken   Jun 27, 2006


As I sit here and wonder why,
I find myself begin to cry.
And while in this corner of pain and sorrow,
I do not wish to see tomorrow.
The pain that's here I can not take,
and soon my soul will begin to break.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Mureen

    Hey, i really like it, but its also very short! but at the same time, its got a lot of feeling in it. good job!!
    thanks for the comment!
    hannah

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good.. definitely has alot of emotion in such a small poem. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tru

    Lost in darkness that consumes,
    My soul a flower that never Blooms.
    Will I make to tomorrow?
    I'm just asking for a little happiness to borrow.
    I guess I'll hang my head and hide,
    Finally destroyed by your pride.

    Thought I'd finish it for you. it was good tho.

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