I love this poem, its so emotive

Again just wonderful, so much conflict so much pain, but yet what is right and what is wrong. how to weigh bad with bad. the unfair advantage society places on human beings is sickening, the world has just been fuc ked so far backwards i no longer know what to do with things, and in its own way i find this a wonderful example of that

Wow-great work.

october xx

The death with pain, hate, free anger has sent free in this written. I don't know what else to think. It's confuse but decapitated chest..shouldn't be only the head the only that could end like that? Anyway pools and tearing blood has...it gives so much to think about. It might had beed the weirdest dream huh? Well done.

Charlie

The death with pain, hate, free anger has sent free in this written. I don't know what else to think. It's confuse but decapitated chest..shouldn't be only the head the only that could end like that? Anyway pools and tearing blood has...it gives so much to think about. It might had beed the weirdest dream huh? Well done.

Charlie

LOVE IT!! I can really relate i wish i could express myself in my poems as well as u can

Very good job i like this too it doesnt remind me of a poem its like actual thought

Another great poem done by you
well done
5/5