Aw this is a reallly good poem~
keep writing ^_^

SO DEEP MY FRIEND!!!!! 5/5
xxxxx

Hey great poem!
great job def 5/5
love mel

Grreeeat poem!

Dude this poem is.... well its amazing. Your not lying about life. thanks for the comment on my poem. Im okay... I'm just a bit tweaked about going to a new school thats all.

Hey great poem!
well done, ur a great poet !
lov eml

Yea i love this poem too

I like this,
its wierd how u can find simularitys between things.. :]
nice work
xx

What a beautiful way to look at things this is a great poem

Noelle Wright =)

'Try to look at the world from a new perspective from this day on.' what a strong opening!
wow:)
I loved this poem!
Keep it up my dear:)

5/5