Waiting
by Rebecca Jun 28, 2006
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Your always on my mind. i love you more than youll ever know. i want to feel your touch right now. not wait another three years or so. wanting you to be loyal would be too much for me to ask. so ill wait til the day your by my side. so i know that it will last. because waiting for you is much worth my time. And I want your heart to forever be mine. you can make me smile, you can make me cry. to you id be faithful. to you id never lie. i dont know how people can hurt you like they do. and he doesnt deserve you in his life. if abusing is all he knows how to do. come live with me and ill treat you right. ill promise to love you. not put up a fight. you'll SEE how i love you. you'll SEE how i care. how ill never leave you and always be there. |
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17 years ago
by jessy
Wow this is a great poem..it also explains how i feel....your really good.....oh yes and thank you for the comment on my poem destiny....i am glad to know that there is other ppl who know how i feel...i thought i was stupid and the only one to be in love online...but yeah thank you
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17 years ago
You know, the rhyme scheme is really good, and although I could read along without problem, if you put it in stanzas, the reader would be able to follow the poem alot better. Still yet, I'll give you a 5.
