Excellent poem. It's deep. Love it. 5/5

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I like it, i'd give it a 4/5

Wow!! funkey monkey i love this lol so funkey

Its cool but sad in a way but still nice i like the words u used they are weird

I lke the ending its pretty cool and i still think its a pretty cool poem im adding a new poem soon hope u can comment it

Way, expressive, good

Excellent job on this poem u really have talent and i know exactly how u feel i've been there many times well keep up the awesome job luv heather :)

Hey awum poems I love great work and thx alot for commeting mine but anyways great work keep it

Amber

Great poem!! Your verry good!!

Very good. I liked how it rhymed. :) Keep up the good work!!!

~~spanish367

Great work! I loved it! Nicely done Craig.

-Jennifer. (Sexy Secretary, lol)