Awwwwww this hurts me to read! I hate reading about death although I must admit you write of it very well...beautiful write so sorry to hear of the loss!
-Krissey

I liked the first stanza, it was pretty cool.

She let go
And her prescence wasnt there anymore
She loosened her grip
And let her life fly away

I also liked that you included the letter in the poem, I think that's special.

XoXo
Gaby

Awwww, that brought tears to my eyes..it was soo heartfelt..i really loved it, and i definitely gave it a 5/5

Beautifully written,yet very sad--The flow is flawless and the way your worded everything made it so real. I love how you ended it with saying how she looked like an angel. I thought that was sweet---Great job! 5/5

Very sad and touching poem.. Very well written.. I'm not sure what else to say really.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Good poem a 5/5 4 me..

Nice poem! very sad too!

but if you wanna be very very good! try writting from ur heart and imagination! trust me it always works :) i will find a place for u in my favorite ;)

Keep it up!

Very

Good

Sorry didn't mean to break it up like that, yeah though very good poem

Awww. I hope your well! 5/5

That gave me shivers! that was an excellent poem. great imagery in that last stanza. it really brought the whole poem together! 5/5