Lah De Dah. . . We are sooo cool! Haha!!

It's awesome!! I'm in love with it lol.

I can't really say anything else.. Since I helped write it =D Haha!!

ahh, we're MEGA earthworms!!

I--I Completely agree with the whole thing! Don't give yourself up--good message

Wow! i really love it! it is very insprirational since i'm going through some rough times right now. i'm always looking for poems, lyrics and things about this sort of topic to read.

jamie

p.s.
i saw your thing in the forum. can you do two of my feartured poems. thank you!

WOW!! You both did a grreat job on this! It had such a great message, so inspirational. You are both amazing writers! I really have nothing else to say. It was just so good.

Wow this is good really good...i really loved it ....good job...5/5

Very good. I liked it a lot. To hear it sung would be even more awesome. You two need to write more of those. 5/5

Wow--those lyrics would truley make a great song-Ususlly when I read lyrics I cant place them with a voice but this one was different. Also I love the end how it kind of fades off-Amazing job-Everything about it is perfect. 5/5

I left Natalie a comment telling her how much I liked this, so now I will tell you. I love the message that it gives, very inspirational and well thought out. The chorus is really good and stuck in my head. It would make an amazing song. Great job on this! 5/5

Good overall message that I think is very inspiring for today's youth. Good work both of you.

Excellent job on this one! It really brings a person out into the open! Goos job!

xoxo sammycakes

Awh, I can't believe I missed this one! I was so excited when you guys were writing it! Lol, excellent job! The flow was perfect, the words you chose great, and I loved all the phrases in parenthesis! Wonderful work again, I love all your stuff! 5/5

Beauiful song.

Woo
I really love this has inspired me to think more hopeful on life. muah muah i love it still =D

Is this a song or a poem?
Realy good 5/5

Sam Mayo