I loved that poem...I can really relate to it! It was so well written, flowed perfectly, and you had such a good choice of words. Beautiful poem, keep it up.
Great job
5/5
Breanna

Hey Jeff. Really enjoyed reading this. As Bre said... it flowed so nicely... something ppl can relate to. I like the little change in the middle, gives the poem some light and shade. Very nicely written.

Godbless
Sammib

Jeffrey! Great job with this one. I actually like it! Kidding, I have liked your others...I think. haha. Um. I think you should stick to rap though. Your good at him home dog. lol.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4.6/5