Comments : Vanished Charm [Not An Object]

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Deary!

    One! YAY NEW POEM *dances for you*

    Two! My god I hate when guys do this its like if you want boobs and a butt go see a hooker okay? x_x

    Three! Yippee new poem lol. its wonderful though seems a bit off.... but I like it, it has some sort of ... rough edge to it that gives it flare =D

    As I take your order, our contact breaks.
    Your eyes wander, no longer focused on my face.
    As you seem to evaluate me, watch my mouth tighten.

    Niice!

    Love always Jenn

  • 17 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Brilliant hun and truthful i hate jerks like that! take care xxxxx