This again was very good, Its so hard to let go of someone you really care about. A couple of minor spelling errors , try spell check, It just makes it read a little better, It was very heartfelt.

This is really veryyy heartbreakiing! it made my heart break just reading it! i can really relate to this poem.. and while reading it.. i just remember the feelings that i have felt.. it's like my heart was torn out of its place, thrown on to the ground, and stepped on... like it was nothing... just a meaningless piece of rubbish.. your choice of words are really great..
keep up the great workk...
take care..
luv,
haya 3gab =]

P.S. if you dont mind can you chek out some of my poems...