Whoa, its so well done. Like a hand pulls you from the first line to the last. very nice.

Another brill poem. flowed well, words made snese, beautifully written. everything a poem could need, keep writing
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Another sad poem. The flow in this one was extremely good. You have some talent. I love reading all your poems. I have nothing to really say about this one, but you did a good job. Keep it up.

Cayce x

Nice paradox at the end. Brought the poem to life. Really well penned, I enjoyed every second of it.

Peace. [Sole]