She was still on her break..
I was so made to be awake. *******

Sorry for the missing line, i actually sent this poem to her phone, using "You" instead of her. and used present time not past. But anyways i somehow forgot that line, hope you all enjoy this poem.. Coming straight from the heart..

This poem is so touching
love really does hurt,
though it is purly beautiful at the same time
great read, and i hope every thing with her works out
all the best

**smile**

I was so mad to be awake***

lol... its 4:17am

Sorry for all misconvience

This is very touching I really do love it here is a 5

Aww tat was good way good

Hmm wow it was really good! i like where u said ''I never knew this love,
could be so defeating...'' it's true and i know how u feel. Great poem loved the flow. Keep it up!!

Very good keep up the good work

timehealallwounds*

Wow
its beautiful

Oh well then nevermind about danni...my scrren name is fatkatgoboom...instant message me sometime

That is a true feeling right?
I totally understand