by brunetjeuh Jun 29, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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Boy I never want to hurt you again |
by Bonnie Rose
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Hey i really liked this, ive been in a similar situation. its deep and emotional. i think it could flow better if you re aranged the lines a bit but at the same time, im a big fan of free verse so either way its really gd! keep it up |