Oh wow... this is really good and the end of it i relate to it anyway. No one want to know truest me lol.keep up the good work 4/5

~rin~

Amazing nice it is really good keep up the good work 5/5

That is good i like it...but i also like all poerty...so yeah...it was good 5/5

This is real good is it true?? i like it alot

keenan

This is a very good poem! i loved it! i like how u put real life situations in it! 5/5 hehe

I know EXACTLY how you feel.
this is a GREAT poem!

Wow..very good poem.i could really feel the emotions of it.keep it up!!
--lexie

Hey great poem, i really liked it.
keep it up
dee

"hurt so bad -to bad to hide" thats so true in alot of relationships. i love this poem it shows how no matter wat 2 people go through somethings can go wrong