My Dearest Allie

by just.another.lie♥   Jun 29, 2006


My dearest Allie,
I couldn't sleep last night because I know that it's over between us. I'm not bitter anymore, because I know that what we had was real. And if in some distant place in the future we see each other in our new lives, I'll smile at you with joy and remember how we spent the summer beneath the trees, learning from each other and growing in love. The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds, and that's what you've given me. That's what I hope to give to you forever. I love you. I'll be seeing you.

-Noah

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    by XxSilentScreamXx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Leah

    Hey I think you could be a really strong poet if you paid a bit more attention to the rythem of your poems. Follow a beat through out your entire poem and remember that if the word your ryming has one syllable and you can't find another one syllable if you have to place a two syllable word after the one syllable word, go back and a another 1 syllable to the already one syllable word. if you dont get this, email me and I'll explain. p.s. i'm a big fan.

    xox leah

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