We enjoyed that quite a bit...Very good use of a high vocabulary.

"Acceptance is at hand... are you now worthy of great power?"

This piece is very good, the vocabulary and atmosphere you’ve created are very effective with the theme. The content is very well presented and clear. Overall a very well written piece. also fairly unique, think it may be the only satanic piece I've ever read

Well written, very gothic.

Great use of words and it is put together well. Very dark but captivating. Wonderful write, I liked it! Keep up your good work and thank you for your comment on my poem.

Very well done.
You have an exquisite vocabulary.
I didn't understand all of it.
But I did love it.

Peace-Alex

Very nice work setting a dark atmosphere. I started to read the first line and I jumped up to turn off the lights. You know it's a good poem when you can make a fat man jump up. Keep it up my friend.

5/5

Beautiful job! I love the topic. Keep it up