Improve it.
i hope next time it will improve

I know exactly what that feels like...

Good work, I loved it!

I liked this poem..
5/5

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Wonderfully Written,
Great Work
Nice Rhyme
awesome job
5/5

I also have a Question, I see that your a Manager in your Group (Emotions Unleashed), I am a Member in the Club ( Poets Chillout Lounge) We Would like to see if your club will Compete with us in a Club Contest
Rules: Love poem, One Poem per person.. thats all
Kristen is the girl who will be judging this contest If you accept it

we have 9 members joinin in the contest, if you can't get at least 9 members we can bump our people down to your number to make it even.

The Contest will be held in the Discussion Board's Forum (Contests section)

Do you accept?
Please Chat this out with your Club if you do..

U use word and make them so powerful great job 5/5

I din't know waht my body was doin wile i was readin ur poem... so if u do edit it and "improve" it then my bodies in 4 a surprize