I liked this poem! Good job! Really expresses the feelings well. I can relate, sadly enough. Great job again. Keep writing, you have definite talent! Check out some of mine! 5/5

This was a good poem. It's sad though:( By "ardor" I think you meant "adore". Anyways, great poem, keep it up.

--Steph

Nice poem, the rythm is off a bit, but good free style

Hey great poem I liked it alot