Never Good Enough

by CoLliN   Jun 30, 2006


Your caramel lips
Your beautiful blush cheeks
rushing through my mind
long flowing black hair
leaving me in awe
even nature wonders who you might be
leaving me knowing
that your with me
forever caught in your grasp
forever to be locked away in your heart
i cannot help but gaze when i stare into your eyes
feeling so good because you were always there to hear my cries
then boom....
you left me for my brother
why couldnt it be another?
then you laugh at me
but now i have finally
figured
that you were too good for me

By CoLlin

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Use grammer..l.ike commas and such to add dramma and effect your words..wit hthis peom it woudl eb perfect..lalso use line breaks and seperate lines...to add more emotion....wow this poem is BRILLIANTTTT.

    by the way people who dis you were your brother are nto too good for you....your too good for them...cuz they didnt kno wha they had..they needed sumthn else and thats jus a fact not an insutl.

    also amzming detil which rly made this poem come alive excellent controlling metaphors!!!

    lissa

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