Comments : Tasty treat

  • 17 years ago

    by Charles OConnor

    This character was very effectively developed, insane, terribly demonic and crazy. I loved it... 5 stars all the way.

    Charles "In everything I am an outsider"-H.P. Lovecraft.

    (authorsden.com/charlesdoconnor)- check it out ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wowwwwwwwww all i cna say hun..amazing.

    Lissa xoxo

  • WOW Loved it 5/5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Amberinaa

    Evil and horrific. I loved it. Way to goo.:D

    Amberinaa*

  • 17 years ago

    by Evil love

    Evil, demonic,horrific,and painful. i loved it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by VINTAGE Ladey

    Good poem vaney(like all of them)
    i really likehow u write ur poems...they r so goood!
    bye bye

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    WOWWWW I THOUGHT I HAD crazy s**t
    in my head you are insane good job
    5/5 without a doubt cy