I didnt understand the word lugubrious lol but otherwise its brilliant xxx

NIce. very deep. i like.

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
Also thanks for your comment on my poem If I, I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

Very poweful i love the choice of words
good strong poem
nice work
haha and yes. i mean through haha
but this was a very good poem
you havent lost your touch