That was nice usually when writers write like that it's usually a girl but you swithched your's up which made it a bit more intresting. i like!

Aww thats so sad! its a great poem and true for so many ppl..and i agree with Chasity its about a boy this time and normally it about about a girl...
well done ur a great writer! keep it up!
XobrittoX

OMG! you are really talented this is great!…can you please comment on my poem “Since Forever” and “Let it Bleed”, thank you, if you have time! Xoxo C ‘n’ V

Aww so sad, its good, 5/5 keep it up

Awww, thats so sad, you got my crying towards the end. Great writer.

This is an awesome poem.. keep up the GREAT work!! A+ on this one good job!

Wow,,,A really good poem. Some things didn't rhyme but it doesnt matter because the words made up for it. You did a good job expressing in this poem. Well done

That is so so sad but a good write keep it up plz can u comment on sum of mine?

Wow thats a really sad poem but amazing ...good job

Wow this is so sad. :(

Omg wow that is sad.. very sad. it has a lot of emotion put in it. its very deep. i like it. u wrote this so well. i love hte flow of it the rhythm and word choice. great job. keep it up. stay strong
take care
angie

Waauw.. That's beautiful hun :)

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