Wow Nikki that was so good, i loved it so much. Your dad's an ass and is obviously not the kind of person you want to imitate, you can't jsut run away from your problems, you're stronger than that, and you've got me!

*mwah* I love you so much

Great poem

--Steph

I love that, it has so much meaning and feelings. that was awsome. and that is messed up that n.e 1 would leave you or n.e 1 else

I'm sorry to hear that. But, you bring it out in such a beautiful way. I love how you use such descriptive words; I can see everything so lucidly in my mind.

Wow this was deep and you used such powerful words and imagery.
I felt a totured soul longing to be set free from a haunting past memory.
Eventhough it was super sad it was an amazingly beautiful write.
Sorry that had to happen to ya this way.

Tragic portrayal of something no one must ever go through. your writing shines through what you have undergone and the beauty of your writing is proof enough that you have won over the demons; and that you will always shine.

take care.
good luck always and peace
shobhana

Nikki -
This was terrific! Just simply, wow. It really kept my attention, and I enjoyed reading it. The rhyming was good, not so simple. It really added a nice twist that most people fail to include in their writing.
Much thanks for your comments and votes on my poetry, I really appreciate it. You yourself are a breathtaking writer, so promise to keep it up. =D
5/5

Love much,
Sam

Wow babe! that was awesome..i am completely and totally speechless!

Killing Herself Slowly
From Herself She Tends To Run
But No One Can Blame Her
Dad Showed Her How Its Done
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that was my favorite stanza..To me that made up a big part of the story that was told! it was great, you wrote it beautfiully! keep it up sweets you really do have talent!

Nikki, this was just superb.
I love it. You've used such a magnificent choice of vocabulary, and throughout, you tell a gripping story. This is one of the best pieces I've read in a while.
Excellent work. x

Wow, I love reading you stuff!! This one was filled with so much emotion!! I love the words you use it paints the picture in my mind!! You are a fantastic writter!!! Is your stuff published?? If it isnt it should be!!! You have beame one of my favorite poets on this site!! the flow and rhyme were fantastic as well!! 5/5!!! Keep it up!!