Thanks for the compliments..

Love it soooooooooo much u just make me see the image and to feel the sun and the freedom i like the words and the thoughts in this poem well done

Well done Mery

Very sweet message in the poem.

Cute ryhme! :)
I love the truth you express in this poem.
:)

I don't think this poem should be further revised (I am not lazy haha) because it was written years ago, and reading this shows your evolution in poetry. It shows how much you've grown.
Well done. I love the message
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I like the flow of this of this poem that i can relate to :)

Good job. Ride on.