I understand your love for this person. Every sentence in this poem I can relate to. You penned this beautifully. :)

5/5

I like your perspective on love

Do you know,my love for you is true,
The every beats of my heart is only for you,
If you never know, why don't you try?
To look inside my heart the feeling is hide.
its too hard and it hurt so nice poem love it 5/5

Beautiful love poem.
I like the rhythm of your writing.

Even earth detains me to breath - like it!

In the third stanza; I'd remove the word co'z and put a comma after afraid,

don't be afraid, I'll be your guide.

very open and tender poem. very good!

When truth is known, difference is clear... Skillful blend of emotions, nicely secured on paper.. More grease..

Thanks for taking the time to leave your comment and vote on my piece. i wanted to take the time and return the favor! i really like your work but i feel like you'd have an easier time expressing yourself if you worked on your english just a little more. i can tell what you're trying to say, but you have the wording wrong on a lot of things. like i said, i can see a lot of potential, but you need to hone up on your english just a bit :) nice work, and keep it up!