Hmm lots of feeling that's for sure. The wording is nice. Overall great for an abstract poem. good job :P

Very good poem, I liked it alot. I know how you feel on this one, lol. Keep up the good work.
Love, Silver.

Tht is a great poem. I can tell you i Feel just like that sometimes.It sounds like you've had it tough like me.Well just keep yur head up high and you'll be fine.Lata.buy bye.Get back to me.

That is a great poem it goes deep into the love feelings

This is a poem with lot of emotion. Good job, it was i nice read went smoothely.

~rin~

Thisis different but vry gdoo for ur first poem..kee[ i up. i look forward to reading more.

Lissa xooxox

Wow....powerful hun....im impressed

Hey once agian, nice poem, alot of feeling in it, very deep, but if you made it rhyme it would be better
xavier

Thats how me and my ex are. we live in the same appartment complex. and yes. it hurts. when he dont even look @ me.

Hey girl i liked your poem alot and i know what your talking about and its a life lesson but you learn and move on its hard but you do get through it... if you need a friend im here ok _krisanta_