WOW-i dont know who in the right mind would give this a 3!!!! I thought it was really touching and deep---At first the flow was a little awkward but as I read it it smoothed out. I think I just read it wrong at the beginning--- I love how you told a story and went through the steps of your relationship. It really hurts to lose a relationship that had meant so much, but the moral of the story was good!! 5/5

Wow that was like so great can you belive the same thing happend to you and me!! keep it up 5/5

Awww!! That was soo good! I almost started crying at the end! You did a very good job on this! There was so much emotion in it. There wasn't really a structure but I liked the rhyming! Good job!

Cayce x