So sad. so very sad.
but you are a beautiful writer.
~Emah

Scars, bruises, invisible pain
Carved straight to the bone
She realized once and for all
She's destined to be alone''

I love that Verse. The reader can feel how your hope is getting smaller. Or maybe i just look at poems from my perspective {of no hope. lol}

Really amazing ending too.

Lv A, x

Great job, nice poem

Wow.
what an amazing poem.
i havent gotten to read yours in a while.
i havent been on here in a long time.

Hey i havent been on in a while but thank you for the comment...again you amaze me more with your skill...keep it up ^_^

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