I used to be extremely happy with you before,
But to be honest I dont feel that way anymore.
[I liked those lines alot.]
I thought this was a pretty good poem. It had a great meaning in it. It flowed well, your rhyming was good. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Did this really happen to you? MMM..would you help me out? I'm like that guy who you're writting to.. and i guess i suffer some kind of same way. But i've been thinking that i have to change that cause that's stupid from me..but would you do that for me?

Did this really happen to you? MMM..would you help me out? I'm like that guy who you're writting to.. and i guess i suffer some kind of same way. But i've been thinking that i have to change that cause that's stupid from me..but would you do that for me?

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Charlie

Thaaanx Talee and InDiA... AND ofcorse i'll check out ur poems and rate them =p

bURNING mY hEART aLIVE.. yeah this really did happen to me.. and i wouldnt mind helping if u need some help! =)