Comments : Shattered in silence

  • 17 years ago

    by Erica

    I think the title is great polly. great poem too. especially the part where you said:
    Everything I say,
    seems to fall on deaf ears,
    i liked it =) good job
    ~cherry

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    "is an ever worse fear"... ever? do you mean even? 'even' seems to work there better, personally.

    Personally not sure about the title either, since you bring it up, but I think the title is something that a reader shouldn't question - it means something to the writer and that's all that matters.

    I love the twist ending. I think it's a fantastic poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow. Such a sad ending. But such a great poem. This was amazing hun. Keep up the great work. 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I love; Love Poems. And I think this one is amazing. In my oppinion the title is fine and fits with it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow. I really am a huge fan of your poems. Great write. I actually think the title to this poem works very well, with the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by So Beautifully Broken

    Really good , expresses alot of emotion . keep up the good work .

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really liked this poem i found it to have alot of emotions throughout it. It was expressed nicely. The twist and the ending was great. although i feel in some places that the word choice was too commen but not that much. Other then that well done on this poem. Liked the titles too btw! ~mel