Short, but very well written. i liked it a lot. 5/5

Heather - this was a really good poem! Your rhyming and rhythm flowed so smoothly which allowed easy reading for the reader. I really liked it, probably one of the best short poems I`ve read on this site. It had a good theme too.
Keep it up hun!!
5/5

**Samantha Hollywood

I guess you like short poems too lol. This one was really good too! The flow was good. The rhyimg felt a little forced in some places, but you couldn't really notice very much. Great job on this one too!

Cayce x

Again, rhyming was forced in places, but i thought it was very good for a short poem, it had some really good points within the poem, keep it up
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