Comments : Sandcastles

  • 17 years ago

    by heart_of_swords

    That is soo good, i reali like it... i wish it would happen to me... hopefully it will - one day:P oh well - well done:)

  • 17 years ago

    by dee

    Whoa.. that ones by far my favourite. im actually pretty speechless.. i loved these lines though:

    Your arms hold me tender
    Your love is so sweet
    We kiss in the water
    The sand at our feet

    it gave me chills haha.. well not really but you know what i mean. i loved it...

    dee

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awwwwww!! Soo sweeet! lol I suck at writing love poems! I wish I could write one like that! You did a wonderful job on it! Keep writing!! =]

    Cayce x