I.love.your.poem.
honestly.
It is amazing, it is heartfelt
It has rythim
seems to rhyme.

I love all the aspects of it.

I could use some pointers T-T

Hey zev...i liked this poem. really sweet. keep up the work..five all the way

vanessa (vaney)

Hey Zev. nice poem.. I like it didn't really find anything wrong with it :) Keep up the good work

Aww that was soo sweet=)
love it.

I luv dis !!! straigh from da heart !!! keep writing

Wow...i loved it.
Speechless...excelletn piece.

Lissa

I love your poems and your advice can't wait to get more of both from you

I like how all of your poems are about love... it is good t osee someone who has so much love in their life and can share it with the world. this poem is a great representation of the love you are sharing. i like this poem a lot. it is really heartfelt and seems like you took a lot of time wrting it. great job... totally a 5/5

Wow your very talented. I love your work. Keep it up!

DevilsAngel