Comments : Here we are

  • 17 years ago

    by jo

    Hay i think that is a really good poem and i like it very much.

  • 17 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Beautiful job, great rhymings as well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Sweet poem----I like the topic and the emotion in it about leaving a friend and then getting to see them again---The flow is great! Amazing write-5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    STEPHY!!!!!!
    This was soo great! I can definitely relate to this, I feel as if I wrote this poem! It describes me soo well! You`re an amazing writer, keep it up! You really convinced me that you can write about anything -- I`m going to add you to my faves list [ if you`re not already on it ]

    Thanks,
    Sam

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    That is a really sweet poem. So very heartfelt and filled with so much emotion. My favorite stanza was;
    We went onto high school,
    Our middle school memories, a distant daze,
    I remember the drama, the fights,
    From our long gone junior days
    Yeah, I remember all the drama of middle school, but it's seemed to follow me into high school. But this is a really good poem. I'm sure that many people can relate to it, and it has a nice rhythm and flow to it. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by not a poet

    Awww this one is sweet! loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    But, tonight, here we are together,
    I never thought Id see you again,
    The memories come flooding back,
    And I remember why you were my friend.
    [Loved that stanza. It was more than great!]
    I really liked this poem. Even though I got the drift that it's about leaving primary school to go to highschool, it reminded me more of when I had to leave my highschool and leave my friends behind. {I was expelled} So yesh. I thought this was a wonderful poem! Keep the awesome work up babe! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Your a really talented writer. rock on:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Anton

    Well done greate poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Juls

    Good job. Sounds like a true friendship :]

    Juls

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was absolutely awesome, i love friendship poems, and i loved this one so much, i can relate as some of my close friends, i have not seen in years and I miss them.
    keep writing my friend
    xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Seems to end rather abruptly, and that's a shame because it left me expecting more. Try not to let your readers down. You don't really need the comma's at the end of each line, but overall, nice poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    Wow. I feel I can relate to this a lot, but not at such an extreme scale. Very nice work - the rhymning and flow were perfection.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 17 years ago

    by Driver

    Excellent poem. you can sense your care for your friend. well written. good job.
    Driver

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Ok so im definitly adding you to my favorites.. another really great one