by jo
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Hay i think that is a really good poem and i like it very much. |
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Beautiful job, great rhymings as well. |
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Sweet poem----I like the topic and the emotion in it about leaving a friend and then getting to see them again---The flow is great! Amazing write-5/5 |
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STEPHY!!!!!! |
by Bridgette
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That is a really sweet poem. So very heartfelt and filled with so much emotion. My favorite stanza was; |
by not a poet
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Awww this one is sweet! loved it! |
by Natalie
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But, tonight, here we are together, |
by Laura
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Your a really talented writer. rock on:) |
by Anton
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Well done greate poem! |
by Juls
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Good job. Sounds like a true friendship :] |
by Tara Kay
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This was absolutely awesome, i love friendship poems, and i loved this one so much, i can relate as some of my close friends, i have not seen in years and I miss them. |
by Tiny Reader
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Seems to end rather abruptly, and that's a shame because it left me expecting more. Try not to let your readers down. You don't really need the comma's at the end of each line, but overall, nice poem. |
by Sole
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Wow. I feel I can relate to this a lot, but not at such an extreme scale. Very nice work - the rhymning and flow were perfection. |
by Driver
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Excellent poem. you can sense your care for your friend. well written. good job. |
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Ok so im definitly adding you to my favorites.. another really great one |