That was a great poem. u made it look like another grl but in the end it was u. i know exactly how u feel. it hurts so much. keep up tha good writting.
love willow xxoo

Aww this poem is so sad.
its really written well the pain really gets to you.
Nice work.

=[ you make me sad. but i suppose that's the point of an emo poem, isn't it?

Great poem such emotion.... keep up the work

The ending flowed great, loved it, great poem, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

It was beautiful and I about cried at the sadness of it. It really makes you think about the world. *5/5*

Alyson