I lov it:)

weakness is something that can't go away. it's ssoo stuped. u told it well. i can't write it better than that:)

Very good poem. I liked it. I think you explained it well to a full understanding. 5/5

The metaphors were terrific and i loved the poem! u may be right, it might be ur best poem ever! that was really well writtten...u need to realize that not everyone is going to hav a celeb's body. but that last few lines of the poem were amazing...
love ya lots,
sore

That's really good it keeped me interested till the end...keep written your really good!

I can honestly say this is one of the best poems I've read in a long time. My eyes got a bit watery because I've seen that sort of thing happen to the one's I care about most right infront of me. I love your technique though, interesting structure and good rhythm, and I think I'd like to read some more of your work. Keep up the good work. :]

I thought you got rid of ana. Great Job 5/5
-Kakashi

The ending is brilliant.
I LOVE~

Sophistication
Turn it away completely
That's perfection

xxx

Oh wow. I love this style, like the words are just tumbling out and you know its all true. And I know how this feels...not full force, but just..mini-ana. And since thats no fun, I can only imagine how that feels. Just, wow.