Short but with a lot of punch.

A dream would not be true, I call it a nightmare,

I liked these lines it gave a nice spin to the dream come true idea.
Nice job all round

Oh my gosh you are a really talented poet Kirsty I love it I can really relate to it!!!

Very entertaining. i really ejoyed it

Kirsty --
I had to give this poem a 4/5. There are a couple reasons why ::

1) SPELLiNG MiSTAKES. Honey, you misspelled your title ;; that`s just not right. I don`t know if anyone has mentioned, or if you did it intentionally, but 'confused' is spelled like that, not like 'confuzed'
2) GRAMMAR. I didn`t like your punctuation choices ;; '!'

**A dream would not be true, I call it a nightmare**

This line in the poem was great. I could understand where you were coming from.

Dreams are something we wish from.

Nightmares are what scars us.

But it was a shor poem. but I understood it perfectly. It was a great peom.

Keep up your good work.

You are very talented!

Within all this poems..this one was good 4/5. but, I guess you should work on your rhythm. Some lines are well written but too long. Try to handle this. best wishes Insignia

Great work. :)

Good poem, i really liked it :D and thank you for your comments, check out my other poems ty xx

Great poem! I loved it!

Wow a short poem, yet it was so strong!
well done and keep it up!!!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Niceeeee hehehe keep it up gurl =P

Lovely poem. 5

This really speaks i like it....

That was a good poem, dint quite understand it that much but hey its cool. lol
thanks for the comment.
well love ya bye!

Lovely rhyme scheme. It's wonderful.
Excellent read.

There was no one around to help with the pain,
The evil spirit in you proved my loss was your gain!

^Great ending.
5/5
xx.Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay.xx

Very well writen! very emotional
good work ..very good ryhming!

from sophie :)

Very powerful... Is this a real-life experience? 5/5. Very well written. Comments are appreciated.

Oh wow i liked this poem. i like short poems especialy :D huray :p but also because its short you left alot out, like who did it too who exactly, its good to leave a sence of mystery to the audience, lets there emagination bring out the worst :p nicely done!

That was relly good I can relate to that poem

I like the rhymeing, and how it all makes sooo much sence...ususally when ppl make poems like that, they jump around. but i can completely understand urs! keep it up!