Comments : His Presence

  • 17 years ago

    by Krissey

    Oh the Lord is amazing isn't he? Beautiful poem you used great personification and imagery i just loved this write! Well done piece 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Roni

    Good poem.... good imagination (hee hee)

    -Roni

  • 17 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Your detail and description was just so.....Amazing...I loved it
    heartfelt
    Real
    everything was good
    5/5
    ~MF~