Without You

by ABrookeD   Jul 6, 2006


I sit and watch the sunset
Take one deep breath and turn around
There you are behind me
Staring without a sound

I look into you soft eyes
Trying to find the words to say
But as I reach my hand out
You turn and walk away

I feel the urge to chase you
But my body is restrained
I try to call your name out
As your shadow starts to fade

When I think of all we've gone through
My stomach starts to churn
My hands begin to quiver
And my heart begins to burn

Tears they slowly stream down
And my whole body starts to shake
That's when I finally realize
That I've made a huge mistake

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awwwwwww that's soo sad! Very well written though. Keep up the good work.
    => 5/5

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Very sweet
    very greatly written and well expressed
    I felt every line, every stanza. oh so adorable and enjoyable to read

    very fascinating work honey keep it up
    Love
    NemO xxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Tamra

    Very sweet. Great job. 5/5 Thanks for the comments by the way.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A very nice romantic poem, great job

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    I can relate alot 5/5

    timehealsallwounds*