Comments : Fragile Girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow that was extremely visual and therefore haunting. The fact that this comes straight for the heart, or i assume anyway with such strong words of pain and misery, makes me so sad. I just want to hold you, make thigns better. That's pretty selfish i guess.
    I want you to know i'm always here for you,..hope to talk to you soon i miss u:(
    xoxoxoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by ImNoTpErFEct

    Really good :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Flying Phoenix

    Amsolutly fantastic. The imagery is amazung and you can really feel the pain in this poem....
    I LOVE IT

    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephy

    Excellent...!
    I loved it...well expressed
    -xxxxx-

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenie

    O SIS!!! THIS WAS WRITTEN SOOOO EXTREMLY WELL!! AMAMZING!! IT JUST -KILLS- ME BC...I NO WHO THIS POEM IS ABOUT: A -BEAUTIFUL- && PERFECT GRIL!!...MY SISTER!!
    U R SO THIN! SO PERFECT! IM SO SRY...U R IN PAIN!!!!!!!
    I LOVE U!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hayley

    Awww hunni, stop doin this to urself u are so beautiful jus the way you are! you need to eat baby, if you need to talk i'm always here! love you tons! -hayley

  • 17 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    Wow..its deep darl..been a while..&& yet You are still a great great great poet!!!

    love -angel-

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    Aww hunni, never give up hope. I know easier said than done but I want you to be strong for yourself. I don't like to see you suffering. Luv ya - talk anytime if you like :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow-the imagery in this is amazing!! I could totally picture the looks people give and the way the girl looks too. I got captivated by it once I started reading. Really sad,,,Great job---5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by DamagedGoods

    Love this poem ... check out mine xxxx