That is sooo relevant to my life right now and so i really hit home. very powerful. keep writing, u rock

The last line of the second stanza should be "bear" and not "bare".

I LOVE the last stanza. It's perfect. This is a great poem :)

If your are only 15 that is amazing. You have the soul of somebody much older. All I can say is may your words guide you in the right direction.

Aw, this is such a sad story, but i can really relate, i know what its like to be betrayed by your best friend like that, it hurts so bad. But this situation did make for an amasing poem, great work, keep it up.

--Steph

Really powerful poem-I love the rhyme in it! The flow is on target and I didnt see any errors. I also love your work choice-it really made the poem enjoyable to read. Good write 5/5

Omg dis poem is sooooooo gr8
i luv it keep it up
sophzx

Hey! excellent poem! 5

This has happened to me, such an emotional thing to occur. welll once again i loved you work!
keep it up!

Sad but kinda cute, this sounds like a poem I would write. I like it, it's a very broud boring ryhming scheme but you made it work! 4/5