Th pounding of rain on my window,
[Think you mean "The"]

I look up and see the blackest sky,
I've ever seen,
[I thought with this part you could say this:
"I look up and see the blackest sky,
That I have ever seen,"
It might help it flow a little better.]

I thought it was a great poem though. You used great imagry. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Well Natalie has already beaten me to the little things. Its a good poem, the first verse was my favourite. I didn't like the fire part, that sort of ruined it for me, i enjoyed the description of the storm more. A good job, keep it up!

Beautiful, you really did capture the imager of a thunderstorm, with almost every sense of emotion. I could hear the thunder, see the lightning, feel the wind. I thought that was great how you provoked 3 out of 5 senses. Awesome stuff.

Pretty good, keep it up

This is really good- I love the ending. However, it's seems like you had more to say... the end came kind of abrubtly. Good job.

I loved this poem, it was a very interesting topic..Your imagery was amazing, and the actions of what was going on came out clearly! great job

_-_ Chanelle_-_

@...Amazing poem...i havent read too many poems about nature but i think this one was really well written..5/5..keep up the awesome work!!...@

Not too bad, i know what you're talking about. i lvoe the rain. keep up the good work!
VByers

Hey this is great keep up the good work.
~Kyra~

Nikki --
Overall, this was a good poem. It held a lot of detail and imagery, which is good. But the flow wasn`t steady, and that kind of messed me up. But otherwise, it was good. 4/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I enjoyed reading this one
^^
good job

Excellent first stanza. I think you can make it better by rewriting the last two stanza so it's just "nature"

I love it very well written I love the theme
5/5

God Bless

-Chris

Wow great job of turning the poem into something more than just observing nature that made it really unique and memorable b/c not many people do that
great description and incorporation of literary elements 5/5 !