Great poem, but seem like unfinished poem, cause the readers are wondering who is him?
but it is a nice poem.....

Great job i can feel your words threw reading i like alot

I have so many thoughts on this poem.. you're such a good person Mary. It's sad how the worst things always seem to happen to the best people. They say what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger... and you're the strongest person I've ever met.. honestly. Trust me hun you'll get all of the good things you deserve. I love you so much.