Great poem, can totally relate to wat u wrote, keep it up ur a really good writer

but memba 2 smile kiddo :)

catchya xoxo

Hey kia
thanks for commenting on my poem
this is a really nice poem i really enjoyed it..
=]
xx
greta

Very good poem 5/5 can totally relate. but you just gotta keep ur head high n just think how many other guys are out there.

I really feel this one Kia it reminds me of stuff I write. Thanx for the words of encouragement.

Great poem , I really like it!

Great poem , I really like it!

Hmmm....not the best...it's okay for what it is but not the best. Liked how there had this emotional current entwined within the lines. Words were chosen for a more emotional impact. Some problems with the flow but yeah...more based for the emotional impact.
~Faith-less

Well it was nice.. I like it! keep it on.. there's a lot going on..